Author Topic: Typo in the front page  (Read 4896 times)

jarubyh

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on: December 16, 2011, 04:21:51 AM
This is pretty trivial, but I don't know if anybody has pointed this out yet, so I'll post in the hope that whoever is in charge of fixing these things can.

Try to get back your IT boxes
... with BackBox Linux!

Pro-actively protect your infrastructure with BackBox. It provides pentest security solution incident response, computer forensics and e-discovery. The new release of BackBox Linux includes the last software solutions for vulnerability analysis/assessment and pentesting. It's one of the ligthest/fastest Linux distro.


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Reply #1 on: December 16, 2011, 05:48:51 AM
Yes you are right.

 I also think they meant latest tools not last tools. Anyway, are you guys using google translate?
 I would be glad to help with translation if you need it.

Anyway, I have taken the liberty to translate the front page slides. I have added some of my own content too. See what you think.

Here is a corrected version of the first slide.

Pro-actively protect your IT infrastructure with BackBox. It is the perfect security solution; providing pen-testing, incident response, computer forensics, and intelligence gathering tools. The most current release of BackBox Linux includes the latest software solutions for vulnerability analysis/assessment and pen-testing. It is one of the lightest/fastest Linux distros available on the Internet.

Here is a corrected version of the second slide.

Today IT infrastructures are way too complex. Simplify security in your IT infrastructure with BackBox Linux. Easily manage large security assessments throughout your organization. With few resources and minimal time test your whole network. See how BackBox Linux simplifies security.

Here is a corrected version of the third slide.

The BackBox Team offers penetration testing services for organizations that are serious about protecting their security posture. We actively analyze your network, for potential vulnerabilities, by simulating real-world attacks. BackBox provides us an efficient platform to perform our security tests.

Please let me know what you think.
« Last Edit: December 16, 2011, 05:51:11 AM by r00tb33r »



ostendali

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Reply #2 on: December 16, 2011, 01:54:03 PM
Hey guys,
thank for corrections and/or proposal....

Nope, we are not using any translator to translate....

Here my opinion regardless:
1) Try to get back your IT boxes
it wasn't used for a purpose the BB name....maybe that one: Try to get back your box....

2) correction by r00tb33r
thanks a lot for your corrections, we do really appreciate that....your contributes are welcome guys...

Pls feel free to analyze any of content and propose for eventual corrections.

Thanks again and happy hacking...



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Reply #3 on: December 16, 2011, 02:06:28 PM
front page updated ;)

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Reply #4 on: December 16, 2011, 02:27:10 PM
thanks guys, thanks Raffaele.....



jarubyh

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Reply #5 on: December 16, 2011, 04:24:05 PM
Another thing, between Gentoo, Arch and an army of other riced-to-boot distros, are we really one of the lightest and fastest? BB is fast, quite fast, but that's not really the goal... Maybe "Fastest and Lightest Penetration Testing distro"?

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Reply #6 on: December 17, 2011, 05:57:31 AM
I see your point. I am no Linux expert and certainly not a marketing expert. I am however, very good with English. I corrected all the grammatical errors and tried to interpret as faithfully as possible the point trying to be made. I certainly was not expecting it to be published for the whole world to see, but I don't mind it to be sure.

@Staff

I am glad I could help.
« Last Edit: December 17, 2011, 06:03:44 AM by r00tb33r »



ostendali

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Reply #7 on: December 18, 2011, 08:53:35 PM
That is actually what we are saying, comparing with pentest distros...
we cann not compete with the whole linux distros, not yet:-)

Another thing, between Gentoo, Arch and an army of other riced-to-boot distros, are we really one of the lightest and fastest? BB is fast, quite fast, but that's not really the goal... Maybe "Fastest and Lightest Penetration Testing distro"?